Wednesday, August 4, 2010

Rouges!

Ashstar sat beside his sons, watching them scuffle about in the dust. Many cats were sharing tounges, and Robinpath was sleeping in the medicine cat den. He stretched, and stood up to play with his sons, when a angry yowl broke the silence. He looked to the entrance, as 20 rouges streamed in, the leader of them, Shade. The rouge who had hurt Robinpath. Ashstar flicked his tail onto his kits and they scampered into the nursery.

"Ashstar! We have come to fight for your territory! It is rightfully ours!" Shade yowled at him, eyes blazing.
Ashstar narrowed his eyes, and flicked his tail. "Over my dead body!" He lunged at Shade, and Shade's rouges streamed at Ashclan warriors.

(PLZ comment. I have a surprised for ppl who comment most! ;)

ALSO, I have made a ROUGE CAMP <-----

51 comments:

  1. Skypaw ran in with Flashpaw, and her eyes widened when she saw the rouges. She leaped onto a brown she-cat, and rolled into battle.

    ~*Skypaw*~

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  2. She saw flash out of the corner of her eye, and it somehow gave her strength.

    ~*Skypaw*~

    He fought with a large black tom, who was a amazing fighter, but slow on his paws. He clawed at him angrily.

    ~*Wildspirit*~

    Robinpath guarded the medicine cat den, mad he couldnt help.

    ~*Robinpath*~

    Shadowmoon fought feircely, swiping at any rouge who came close to the nursery. Her eyes blazed silver with feiry determination.

    ~*Shadowmoon*~

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  3. (no sry :( lol)

    He blinked, about to say yes, when he remembered he was still strong on his front paws. "Im fine, your needed at the nursery more!" He looked at Shadowmoon in agony as she dissapeared under rouges.

    ~*Robinpath*~

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  4. (Wildspirit likes Nightclaw sry! Wolfrunner can like Zephyrice?)

    Shadowmoon looked up gratefully, but said nothing as she swiped at more rouges madly.

    ~*Shadowmoon*~

    Wolfrunner nipped in and out of two rouges legs, making them dizzy. He clawed both their flanks roughly.

    ~*Wolfrunner*~

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  5. Lakehoney grabbed her kits away protectively, hissing.

    ~Lakehoney~

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  6. Mintshadow leaped at a rouge and clawed him severley. SHe moved on jumping at a big male one, her long teeth sinking deep into his neck.

    ~Mintshadow~

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  7. Lilyspring claws at the rouges, her backlegs kicking behind her. She leaped out from the rouges, and started to run off before she stopped.

    ~*Lilyspring*~

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  8. Vanillamint fought beside Mintshadow, the kits behind them. A huge rouge fighting both of them.

    ~MInt and Lake~

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  9. Stares at a rouge, seeing it was her brother. "Eagle?!" She leaped and pinned him, and he blinked. "Lily?" She shook her head no. "Lilyspring."

    ~*Lilyspring*~

    (Wolfkit gotta growl at em XD)

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  10. Wolfkit growled and slid under his mothers paws, running into the fight. He got tangled in all the fighting cats.

    ~Wolfkit~

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  11. Shadowmoon saw Wolfkit and ran and scooped him up, setting him down in a bush near Lilyspring and Eagle.

    ~*Shadowmoon*~

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  12. Threw a hissy fit. And ran back into the fight, looking for his father. "Daddy!"

    ~Wolfkit~

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  13. Ashstar was grappling with a large brown tom in the middle of the clearing.

    ~*Ashstar*~

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  14. Ran to his father and bit down on the loners tail hardly. His teeth not letting loose easily.

    ~Wolfkit~

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  15. Ashstar blinked. "Wolfkit go back to your mother!" He pinned the rouge down and stared at his son.

    ~*Ashstar*~

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  16. "No! Mom wont let me help!" Stared back at his father.

    ~Wolfkit~

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  17. He growled in pain as the rouge kicked him. "Wolfkit just go PLEASE!"

    ~*Ashstar*~

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  18. "FINE! My hero!!" Ran off, the opposite of where his mother was, angrily.

    ~Wolfkit~

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  19. Ashstar blinked after him and got pinned by the rouge, he kicked upwards madly and struggled to get free.

    ~*Ashstar*~

    She sat alone, quivering and scared.

    ~*Cresentkit*~

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  20. WOlfkit ran to Cresentkit, "Come on! I have an idea!"

    ~WOlfkit~

    Mintshadow knocked the rouge down, just enough time for Ashstar to get up. Then ran back into the fight.

    ~Mintshadow~

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  21. Ashstar leaped on the rouge, and bit him HARD so he ran away.

    ~*Ashstar*~

    "N-No!"

    ~*Cresentkit*~

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  22. Sighed and ran back into the fight. He stayed by Reedfog, who let him fight by him.

    ~WOlfkit~

    Reedfog stood over the kit, protectively.

    ~Reedfog~

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  23. She blinked after him scared and ducked into a bush.

    ~*Cresentkit*~

    He leaped onto Reedfog and tumbled him over.

    ~*Shade*~

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  24. Reedfog rolled over ontop of him, pinning him hard. "WOLFKIT GO!" Said knowing what would happen if SHade got to him.

    ~Reedfog~

    WOlfkit forgot his safety and looked for Cresenkit, ran over to the bush and crouched by her.

    ~Wolfkit~

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  25. Shade snarled and leaped onto Reedfog.

    ~*Shade*~

    She blinked terrified.

    ~*Cresentkit*~

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  26. Reedfog looked at the kits, making sure they were allright. He kicked Shade off.

    ~Reedfog~

    Wolfkit sensed her fear and pressed close to her, "Its okay.."

    ~Wolfkit~

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  27. Cresentkit nodded, still scared.

    ~*Cresentkit*~

    Shade growled and kept biting at Reedfog.

    ~*Shade*~

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  28. Reedfog clawed at him, trying to keep the kits in sight.

    ~Reedfog~

    Wolfkit blinked at her, "Ill protect you."

    ~Wolfkit~

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  29. "Okay.."

    ~*Cresentkit*~

    He growled, getting tired.

    ~*Shade*~

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  30. *Poisonpaw gasped and saw the tom who kitnapped him the otgher day and gulped as he raced over to him*



    *Nightclaw slashed at rouges protecting her clan feircely ajnd growled at a ruge* mangy flea bitten kitty-pet! *the rouge hissed and Nightclaw slashed at hsi throat killing him and smiled* try to kkill my clan now! rouges!

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  31. Skypaw grappled with a skinny black tom feircly, becoming a tangle of claws and fur.

    ~*Skypaw*~

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  32. *Posionpaw quickly thjought of a stradgegy and leaped over the tom and it looked c0onfused and Posionpaw landed on a ttree branch and the tom looked around, very confused*


    *nightclaw slashed at another tom and growled* not this Clan you won't! *she let the tom live and run off*

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  33. Blossompaw widen her eyes and slashed a fox. She bite the fox's leg and then aimed for it's neck, but then the fox threw her off. She hit the den and she yowled in pain. The bramble hit her neck and yowled in pain.
    ~Blossompaw

    Featherbreeze scratched a fox's eyes and then it growled and ran out of the camp. She then turned around and then bite a fox's neck.
    ~Featherbreeze

    Skyleap jumped on the fox that was attacking Featherbreeze. He also, but the neck. The fox collapsed.
    ~Skyleap

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  34. (umm this is a ROUGE fight..)

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  35. (Oops, okay, every fox there is, replace it with rouge.)

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  36. (sure LOL)

    Wolfrunner saw her, and leaped over and under rouges to her. He swiped the rouge off strongly, and clawed his pelt.

    ~*Wolfrunner*~

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  37. Featherbreeze saw that Blossompaw was hurt. She ran to her and grabbed her scruff. She carried her to Snowglimspe. She left her there and continued to fight the rouges. She found a gray she-cat and pounced on her. She scratched her muzzle and the rouge bite her leg. Featherbreeze then scratched her neck. The gray cat yowled and then jumped on her, putting her teeth through her neck. Then she saw a gray tom pick the rouge up and throw the rouge off. "Thanks Skyleap" she mewed. Her brother nodded and ran to get another rouge.

    ~Featherbreeze

    Skyleap ran away from Featherbreeze and jumped on another rouge.

    ~Skyleap

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  38. *Posionpaw thought he was safe when a black tom hurried up the tree and pushed Posionpaw opff, Poisionpaw screamed* (someone plz save him!)





    *Nightclaw didn't hear or see her son falling off the tree and was too busy fighting off rouges who tired to get to the nursery*

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  39. Featherbreeze looked around and saw Posionpaw with a rouge. Featherbreeze widen her eyes and pounced on the rouge, scratching the rouge's muzzle and the rouge's stomach.
    ~Featherbreeze

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  40. Lilyspring fought bravely against the rouges, trying to prove her loyalty.

    ~*Lilyspring*~

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  41. (um Fetaher Poisionpaw ws falling off of a tree)

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  42. Wolfkit watched her, partly amazed. He wanted to help with the fight, but stayed by Cresentkit.

    ~Wolfkit~

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  43. Lilyspring leaped over, and caught Poisonpaw on her back. She crumbled to the ground, but stood up again and leaped into the fight.

    ~*Lilyspring*~

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  44. Wolfkit looked at Cresntkit, and noticed the cats where scattering. He nudged her deeper into the bush, and stayed guard. Sees his mother rushing through the crowd of cats

    ~Wolfkit~

    Lakehoney dodged cat after cat looking for her kits, in a hurry.

    ~Lakehoney~

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  45. Lakehoney got pinned by a huge tom and realized it was Cliff, "CLIFF!" She struggled to get away from him.

    ~Lakehoney~

    Cliff didnt realize it was Lakehoney and clawed her muzzle.

    ~Cliff~

    Lakehoney yowled in pain, "CLIFF! STOP IT!"

    ~Lakehoney~

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  46. Wolfrunner nodded at Zephyrice, and streaked over to Cliff. he leaped onto him and clawed his back.

    ~*Wolfrunner*~

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  47. Cliff finally backed way, seeing it was Lakehoney. "Sorry! I didnt know it was you!"

    ~Cliff~

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  48. *Posionpaw shook his word where shaky and weak and he stared at Dreampaw* yes *his legs shook under him*

    *Nightclaw slashed at a rouge and she relaized it was a queen! the queen turned on her and slashed her back making them in a wrestle of fur and blood*

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  49. Wolfkit pressed up against Cresentkit, protectively. He watched the fight and his mother searching frantically for him and Cliffkit. "I wouldnt be here," He THOUGHT, "If dad would have let me get that rouge!!"

    ~Wolfkit~

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